All people have secret dreams that make us dream every day, with that some day happen and become reality. I've always wanted to buy a car because I like cars and . I have every day in the car of my dreams, when that day will be very happy, but before buying the car, need to learn to drive, because if you do not handle as you can drive my car, so I have always wanted to learn how to drive a car.
I have visited some countries like the United States, Venezuela and Panama, I just lack France, a country which is very nice, wonderful and delightful I think has what it takes to be a beautiful country, I've never been to France, in the future I would like to know this country.
I have many dreams secret Something I've always wanted to learn how to surf, I think this is very interesting hobby. I love going to the beach and watch people surf I think it is fascinating. Also I wanted to learn to cook professionally, because I think in future I need to learn to do everything to be a great person.
I would like to learn to do anything because here in this life to know everything in order to become somebody.
In this life my parents have taught me to be a talented person and I think that in future all you have taught me is going to help me and guide me to achieve my dreams.
Finally, in the future I've always wanted and dreamed of being a profesional.
I've always wanted to be a model because I like the fashion world and also I would like to study medicine and become the best doctor, and help people save their lives.
Mi great dream is to meet someone very special comes into my life with whom I married and had many children.
I think that in this life all dreams are achievable if we are really proposing.
I think that all soul dreams become reality when he clings to them and not forgotten.
Hi Daniela, great composition; but I think you have some mistakes, like:
ResponderEliminarIn the first paragraph in the fourth line, I think that after “a car” has to be a comma. In the first paragraph, I think that the third sentence isn’t drafted very well, so you can organized it. And the last sentence of that paragraph is… “so I’ve always wanted to learn how to drive a car”.
There are some errors like those, so I think you have to review the structure of the sentences, paragraphs and the punctuation, too.
Hi Daniela, good job, but you should review your composition because it has some mistakes: You can say " I've always wanted to learn how to surf or I 've always wanted to surf", and you can say the fashion world, and also I would like to study...
ResponderEliminarI thing you might improve your consistency, thus you can imporve your composition!
Hi danni
ResponderEliminarnice job but I think that you made a mistake when you wrote this phrase : I've never been to France... because the word TO is not proper in that sentence
Hello Daniela I think that you have good dreams and you can make them reality if you wok hard.
ResponderEliminarI think that you made a tanscription's mistake when you said:because I like cars and . I have every day in the car of my dreams, I think that you wrote a period where it doesn't go...
Ok!!!
Bye!!!!!!!!